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31 Oct 2016




I am 27, from Ohio, and I love writing Harry Potter FanFiction and original works! I am married and live with a roommate, one dog, and four cats.



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The Stray by PaulaTheProkaryote

Rated: Teen Audiences • 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Look at this flawless banner by darth vader@TDA



 

Sirius Black learns how to be woman's best friend for a few days.


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gah, why is this a one shot? I want to read more of this! I love the idea that Sirius was taken in as a stray and sort of kind of played around with it in my AU, but not directly. This is so cute and I want to know who the kid is and who the father is and WHY IS THIS ONLY A ONE SHOT, PAULA?!

 

So freaking cute and how he just sort of fell into being her dog and she just ordered him around like a person who would understand. I feel like she would have dragged him in by the scruff of his neck if he had tried to wander away. It was like a Disney movie, oh! I can't stop grinning and there's no next chapter button, Paula, WHY?!

 

Okay, I'm calm(er). I love that he ended up back with her after Azkaban, even if only for a short while. And I love that he made James go with him to fill up her tip jar- there's so much cute, I just can't. This and Summer Vacation totally make up for Bring Her Back, lol.

 

-Liz



Catharsis by abhorsen

Rated: Teen Audiences • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary:

He hadn’t changed since the last time she’d seen him; he was still wearing the same basic uniform he always had - black jeans (judging by the fading around his knees, they might have even been exactly the same black jeans), a faded grey t-shirt, and a leather jacket. His dark hair was still just a couple inches too long. If they’d been as close as they’d been in the past, she might have teased him for looking like a hipster.


She wasn’t really attracted to him anymore. It really was just a lingering magnetism, a lingering “what if” that couldn’t quite leave her mind.


She couldn’t quite convince herself of that, either.


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Catharsis

November BvB! *salute*

HI BRAN! Ooo, an OF, I'm super excited! Your writing style is so nice and flowy, I love it already! Also, I can't help but see Sarah Connor and then Connor from Angel... Too many fandoms in my head for OF today, hahaha.

I love the story you're starting here and I have to laugh because this exact conversation that they are having (well, maybe not exact, but very close) is the same conversation I had with this guy I met a few years and we used to argue about this stuff. He didn't believe love existed. At least for him. He sounded a lot like Connor. That guy is my husband now so I sort of super adore this story already.

Romantic fantasies are a woman’s porn, she thought.
I love this line. And it's true. XD

Justread the line about the existential conversation about the meaning of love in a coffee shop. Now I have the song Coffe Shop Love stuck in my head.

This story is so adorable and so relatable, I think. How many of us have had that person in our lives that we were in love with and were just too afraid to admit it? Put that person so high on a pedastal than any form of rejection would completely wreck us? Any hint that gave us away would make us die of humiliation? And this is me personally, I was in love with my best friend from the day I met him all throughout school. I EVENTUALLY grew out of it, but the idea of ever telling him during that time... I was pretty much Sarah.

Okay, enough with memory lane! Time for a round of technicals!

consumed by hime for weeks afterward,
hime = him

at the last minute.We’ve done this before.”
Missing a space betgween sentences.

She winced, and pushed her chair back. He grabbed her wrist. “Sit back down, and stop running away.”
Unnecessary commas in the first and last sentences.

many more complicated feeling that weren’t
feelings

Again, I very much love this story. I hope other people get a chance to read it. It is just... The definition of unrequited love.

-Liz



Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seeeee? This is what I'm talking about! Feel-good romp! Smile on my face from start to finish- Oooo, I love it! We don't really think much about Percy, though we know he exonerated himself in the end, for the most of the canon series, he's pretty much a huge prat. But here, we see him as a family man having the whole family over for a pool party and of course Freddie (I loooove that you spell it with an 'ie'!) is his favorite. :)

 

And awww, Baby Sam mimicking his uncle's appearance, THAT'S SO CUTE!

 

You have everyone characterized so well here and I love, love, love that Gin and Hermione tried to pull one over on the boys only to have it go south and they still come up laughing about it.

 

I love one shots like this, little snippets of happiness after the war. I do want to know, though- What happened with Aunt Muriel that she got herself uninvited to family get togethers?! Is there another one shot about that? I'll look for one...

 

-Liz



Intemptesta Nox by Alexis Black

Rated: Mature Audiences • 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:



Perfectly creepy banner by Fireheart @ TDA

Aislinn Walker knew when she was recruited as an Unspeakable that her job would be dangerous. Returning to Hogwarts as a student was a task she hadn’t expected. Facing death as it stalked the blood-splattered halls would be a nightmare she might never recover from


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The Assignment

CTF and well hello! *salute* This gave me chilling tingles, holy cow! So, I haven't read chapter one, but there's so much subtext here, I feel like I don't even have to. (On a side note, I actually know someone in real life named Aislinn and we call her Z for short. ^_^) But onward.

 

The concept of shifting I find really intriguing. I wonder if she put a lot of effort into training up her ability if she could learn to shift back farther? It seems plausible. I've never heard of an ability quite like it before and it certainly warrants recruitment into the Unspeakables. At least I'm assuming, I'm still a little unclear on what they do. But I think that may be the point.

 

Moving on, this story certainly seems pretty dark! Her sister died, that poor fifth year died- at first, I thought it was a little 'Never Been Kissed' and I was thinking to myself 'why would an adult return to Hogwarts as a fifth year? If they're young enough, maybe they could pass for a Seventh year, but fifth is pushing it a bit...' But of course, reading gets me my explanation. That's an interesting and terrible little trinket Grindlewald cooked up there, eh? I wonder what else he came up with. I wonder if it has to do with any of these prohecies.

 

And can I just say that that line about the savior having the face of the dead made my the hair on my arms stand on end? I've got goosebumps all over!

 

This certainly seems like a pretty interesting story, but it's totally creepy to the max and I was not in the mood for creepy tonight! T_T

 

I did come across a few technicals for your editing pleasure:

 

Ministry agent to placed in the school
missing the word 'be'

 

Keeper of the Hall of the Hall of Prophecy
the second 'of the Hall' is unnecessary.

 

I refrained from tell Dumbledore the other reason
telling

 

Wicked good stuff!

 

-Liz



Shenanigans, Capers, and Hi-Jinks by Beeezie

Rated: Mature Audiences • 53 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary:

banner by abhorsen. @TDA

 

 

Meeting banshees in the Forbidden Forest, setting the Great Hall on fire, and smuggling in contraband: Victoire and Fred Weasley are trouble with a capital T.

 

HPFT Ravenclaw Nargle: Best Ravenclaw Character (2017) | HPFF Diadem: Little Claw (2016), Ravenclaw SotM: Best Characterization (July 2015)


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Missing the Hogwarts Express

*salut*

 

Some gnarly Nargle reviewing time! I have been meaning to read this fic for a while. I always see it in your sig and I'm just always busy. Now I'm sad I didn't start sooner. The relationship between Fred and Vic is utterly adorable and I love the writing style, how you seemlingly flow through time to shortly in the future or shortly in the past to get the exposition/situation out without doing an info dump and your wit keeps it amusing and interesting. It really draws you in.

 

I also like the subtle way you're dealing with the Teddy/Vic ship. She doesn't see him and immediately swoon at the sight of him (or have some ill-begotten reason to hate him) and it's very casual, like they actually grew up around each other. It's natural and I appreciate it. (Aw, and the little small ways he shows he likes her, like having more pictures of her than other people! That's totally adorable...)

 

So, I'm making it my thing to R&R at least 4 chapters of the longer stories I come across for the Nargles, but I have a feeling this story will prove more difficult to pull away from than most. Should have saved this category for later... Oh well.

 

Anyway, very cute, I am hooked and that's not fair. T_T

 

-Liz



Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The Magical Menagerie

*salute*

 

This chapter was utterly adorable and I'm rather upset that I'm not as familiar with some creatures as I should be. I had to look up almost everything you mentioned except, of course, the basilisk. And if these people knew anything about Harry Potter and his many adventures, they'd know a phoenix could blind one. ;)

 

Though no as amusing as the first chatper, it was still entertaining and the obvious yet subtle (is that an oxymoron?) attraction between Teddy and Vic makes my heart melt. I love a slow burn, even as much as they tick me off sometimes, hahaha.

 

I am tired, though, and not feeling well today, so my reviews are not as full of life and squee. I'll try better next chapter.

 

-Liz



Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Arrival at Hogwarts

*salute*

 

WHO TOLD?! Seriously, the only people I can think of who would know would be their friends/family/people they would normally sit with. So how the heck would they find out? If they weren't informed and neither were the parents, then HOW?! I am made of questions...

 

Fred is quickly becoming my favorite character here. He and Wesley from To Whom It May Concern and and Pickett from etc., etc., (and life goes on) need to have a play date.... Now. >.> But seriously, he's just like "Dude totally wanted to kiss you!" I now have high expectations for a kiss in the near future! And after having watched the first episode of Riverdale recently, it just reminds me of "Archie got HOT!" XD

 

But seriously, I need to know how, so next chapter, running now...

 

-Liz



Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Missing the Feast

*salute*

 

Anthony Goldstein, head of Ravenclaw! I love it! I've been meaning to do something with him lately... Pffft, the ministry can't track people trying to become animagi very well if no less than four people accomplished and lived comfortably as illegal animagi for years and years until they died. Or were found out and blackmailed, but you know...

 

I've never seen Victoire in quite this way before and I do very much love it. Her aspirations to be an animagus, her desire to work with magical creatures- it's wonderful characterization. I still don't understand how they knew she wasn't on the train. Did the trolley lady tattle? I'm so confused. Eh. Because Magic, I guess.

 

I will hopefully return to finish reading in the near future, but I can't guarentee it. I have many... Many stories still waiting to be read. They're very distracting from the ones I want to write, actually...

 

Good luck in the Nargles!

-Liz



To Whom It May Concern by clairevergreen

Rated: Mature Audiences • 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Beautiful banner by steadily@TDA

 

 

Ivy Westover has always dreamed of becoming a world famous magizoologist from the moment she set foot in her first Care of Magical Creatures class. Fast forward a few years, and she finds herself in a dead end desk job with no hopes until her former best friends, famed wizarding naturalist Molly Weasley and bestselling author Harriet Dursley, come crashing back into her life in a way that she could have never expected.

 

To Whom It May Concern:

 

Good luck.

 


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: To Whom The Task Falls

Tag... BvB... *salute*... I just... WOW.

 

Okay, I normally save technicals for last, but here recently I have been forgetting them by the time I get to write the review, so let me do this a bit backwards. This is the only thing I found:

 

-And I found the nails on a the ground.-

 

Okay, onto review! I just... WOW. Ivy is just so REAL to me. Like, literally, I could be here. I'm not stuck behind a desk, but I'm stuck in a factory and all my friends went off to school and are doing their things and I just... I need Ivy to be real so we can bemoan our lives together! So, ahem, I obviously connect with Ivy... >.> But seriously, you put a lot of backstory into this first chapter- hinting at the unrequited romance, explaining how hopes and dreams became paying the bills while her friends lived their hopes and dreams? And the whys as well- family names go a long way! And I already love Wesley- he's my kind of beloved comic relief side character.

 

The interview was amazing- even as it was happening, the reverence with how they talked about the Nundu had me sitting here, imagining it, loving every second of it, big silly grin on my face. How do you WRITE so well? SERIOUSLY! You already have me hooked and there's only one chapter, that's not FAIR! I normally go for the one-shots so that I don't get trapped, but this looked so interesting and I wanted to read one with Molly and I found it interesting that Harriet was a Dursley and I got SUCKED IN! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT.

 

Okay, in side note, I think I know how Rose felt now... Anyway...

 

In short, this is so freaking amazingly written, the characters are just- I can't even begin to tell you how much I love them and there's only been four so far and I barely know Harriet! I'm so looking forward to the rest of this, I can't wait to see what you do with it!

 

-Liz



Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 2: To Whom The Question Is Asked

*salute*

WHAT?! WHAT?!

...

WHAT?!

Okay... It took... WAY too long to finish reading this chapter, but I get distracted! I'm sorry!

Anyway, had to reread/skim through most of the chapter to remind myself what happened and can I please just EMPHASIZE that I absolutely ADORE WESLEY. I love him to pieces. I want him in one of my fanfics so that I can play with him. I just... I'm such a sucker for sida characters. Can Wesley meet up with Picket from ect., ect., (and life goes on)? Because I think... That would be amazing... I'm going to stop day dreaming about fanfic-ing fanfics and random crossovers and get back to your (sort of) regularly scheduled review!

I love that she's a cat owner. I have three. And a dog. *ahem* those gossip magazines sure know how to run their mouths, don't they? Who cares where she goes?! But that is the way of living in the public eye. Everyone cares what you're doing, who you're doing, and well, you know...

MacAllister is a tool. What didn't add up, I wonder? Why isn't he concerned enough to do it himself? I already hate her boss.

BUT THAT ENDING, THOUGH! WHAT?! (Is the next chapter already up, cause I could probably read it tonight!!!)

Until we meet again
-Liz



Handprint by Beeezie

Rated: Teen Audiences • 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

banner by abhorsen. @TDA & SP

 

 

James has landed in St. Mungo's following an acromantula attack. Albus is preparing to run off to join the Aurors. It is safe to say that Lily Luna Potter is not in her happy place.

 

Prequel to Parachute


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Handprint

Tag! Liz here for BvB! *salute*

 

I love this look into someone who either doesn't want to be an Auror or is against someone becoming and Auror. A lot of stories feature characters becoming Aurors and Healers and everyone is so proud and supportive! But it's a bit like sending your friend, sibling, or child off to the military or war. Actually, this reminds me a lot of my neighbor who has done that with her two youngest. She's all smiles and proud of them, but everytime they leave to go back, she's a wreck afterwards, not wanting something to happen to them but not wanting to stand in their way.

 

Lily and Scorpius have an adorable friendship, estranged as it may be with their being in different years. It doesn't matter, though, as long as the person who comes to comfort is okay to have a wet shoulder. I like how you've depicted her position on matters as well as her relationships with her brothers and I really like your writing in general; your characters come across as very real and relatable. Even now, I just want to hug Lily and tell her it's okay if she thinks her brother's are insane.

 

This is a wonderful one-shot. ^_^

 

-Liz



Bring Her Back by PaulaTheProkaryote

Rated: Mature Audiences • 6 Reviews starstarstarstar
Summary:

Amelia Bones is missing.

for lovegood27's Random Pairing Challenge


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Paula, I don't think I've ever read such a riveting one shot like this. The power, the emotion, the sheer edge-of-your-seat anticipation you put into this story is absolutely stunning. I've never read much about many minor characters, so that in and of itself was a pleasant surprise and as the Minister ran to get the information, to find her, to make sure she was safe- the suspense was awful and gut-wrenching. I can see this as canon. I can even see it as a reason why Cornelius stepped down as Minister.

 

Just the brief glimpse into his time with Amelia speaks volumes. Despite personal reservations about the Minister, I can see that he really loved her. And despite canon, I found myself desperately hoping for him to find her alive. Darn it, Paula, I was looking for a feel-good romp one-shot for my Saturday and now I'm depressed. T_T It's still very wonderfully written. Just beautiful. :)

 

-Liz



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Rated: Reviews
Summary:
Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Your Words

*salute*

 

I had to come read since we're both doing the Gauntlet. I'm actually really curious about the contents of the note and it's sort of dampening my sadness level, which is a good thing because otherwise I would be crying and making my own headache worse, lol. I'm also really jealous that you can write such a short and powerful story. I was over 1500 words in before I remembered we had a word limit and I was like, "Well... Crap." I can't do short often. It takes practice.

 

Anywho, I wasn't kidding about the powerful part. And I love that it's Fred and Angelina and that you used existing canon so well that you don't even have to explain that it's Fred, simply reference the Battle and quidditch, it's like a continuation of the books, a little "HPU Characters: One Year Later" anthology type thing, which I suppose helps to the succinctness of the story.

 

Angelina has more self control than me. Trying to be helpful or not, I would not be at all happy about someone trying to throw away such a precious memory. Like... I get it... But I would not be happy about it in the moment. I'm glad Angie pulled it out and tucked it away.

 

This is such a great entry. I feel like I need a redo, hahaha. Looking forward to part 2!

 

-Liz



Remember by lovegood27

Rated: Mature Audiences • 6 Reviews starstarstarhalf-star
Summary:



Stunning banner by the talented beyond the rain@tda

 

The Battle of Hogwarts is beginning, and staying alive is a miracle for both Audrey and Percy. Whether it's for better or for worse has yet to be decided.

 

For SilverMoonFairy's Amnesia Experiment | Also written for Crimson Quill's Strong Female Challenge

 

 

 


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Battle

Hello! A Hogwarts Battle amnesia fic! Ooooh, I'm squirming! So sorry it's taken me a bit to get here and review this, but isn't that what vacations are for? I don't know much about Audrey and honestly, I had no idea she was a Clearwater. And for some strange reason, I thought she was a muggle...? Don't ask why. Must have been a fic I read once put it into my head...

 

Anyway! DID YOU AND BRAX CONSPIRE TO WRITE YOUR STORIES?! Seriously, her entry was about George about a year after Fred's death and then YOU go and write THIS! Well, you wrote yours first, BUT STILL!

 

Lovely cliffhanger! I'm going to the next chapter now because I want to know what happened!

 

-Liz



Author's Response:

Hello, I've finally decided to come and respond :P (and yes, that's what vacations are for) There isn't much canon info about Audrey apart from her name. Her being a Clearwater was a strange head canon I made up whilst writing this fic, but she could easily be a Muggle too. I just didn't really like the idea of Percy meeting and marrying some random non-magical person so...yep, this happened.

 

Yes, I conspired with Brax and we both decided to put Fred's death into our stories to bring back the pain...just kidding, we didn't. Weird coincidences lol.

 

Thanks for reviewing- glad you liked the cliffhanger :D



Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: I'm Not Penelope

Aww, a happy ending. I needed that. Brax made me want to cry with her ending. An interesting little twist and quite bold of you to have all this going on in the midst of the biggest battle of the second war. I don't know how I would deal with that sort of stress amidst all that carnage, but Audrey handles it pretty darn well, I think. And so cute, he came to rescue her at the end! I hope it ends well for them and I noticed you said you're not happy with it- if you ever update or change it, please let me know!!!

 

Thank you for entering into my challenge!

 

-Liz



Author's Response:

Yep, you get a nice ending to save you from Brax's ending. (I read it and it was brilliant but SO sad) Originally, I'd written that Audrey gets depression from Percy's memory loss and dies which would have been...well, depressing. I couldn't get it to work realistically so I changed it to this and ended it on a more hopeful note. Percy coming to save her was sort of like a redemption for him but I imagine that they would still end up together and have Molly and Lucy Weasley, even if it takes ages.

 

I don't think I'm going to edit this since I don't normally do it for plot reasons, but if I do, I'll let you know. Thank you for the review and for setting this challenge! :)



Erasure by AbraxanUnicorn

Rated: Mature Audiences • 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary:

 

Some things, once lost, are gone forever

 

Written for Winding Arrow's Amnesia Challenge


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy crap, Brax. You know, when I first put up this challenge, I was almost expecting some comedy gold, but so far they're all very hard and serious entries and this one was, so far, the most heart wrenching. And the ending- I sort of saw it coming, but it still hits me right in the feels! I'm sure if George put pictures of himself up around town asking 'Do you know me?' someone he knows would be bound to find him, right? RIGHT?! I know it's a one-shot, but I feel like it could be a great start to a full on story as well.

 

I will admit, though, that the fluidity of what he does and doesn't remember was a real confusing ride. He doesn't know why he doesn't like green (especially with silver) which implies he doesn't remember Hogwarts, but he knows what dragons are and he swears to Merlin. I was actually surprised to find that there were some things of the magical world that stuck in his normal habits and other things were completely erased. It also amuses me that he assumes his wardrobe is magical and mocking him.

 

George going on without Fred was always a heartbreaking subject for me and this just pulls so hard at my heart, Brax. I'm ready to cry. Thank you SO MUCH for entering my challenge and for giving me this most amazing story to read.

 

-Liz



Author's Response:

Liz, thank YOU for hosting this challenge and inspiring me to write this story!

I agree - the fluidity of this story is rather suspect, tbh; I have no plausible explanation, except that I needed George to have something to remember, because it would have been a real struggle to come up with a story otherwise! Potions have unpredictable effects, though, so perhaps this one didn't target George's memories in a uniform manner? Maybe..!

I'm sorry-not-sorry that it almost made you cry. Does that make me a terrible person?

Thank you so much once again for the challenge, and this lovely review made my day!

Brax X



I Can Dream by TreacleTart

Rated: Mature Audiences • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Kreacher & Regulus

 

Stunning banner by Katharos @ TDA!


 Written for lilypotterfan123's Bexcellent Shuffle Challenge


My heart is a sad affair

There's much disillusionment there

But I can dream, can't I?


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Delusions

CTF!

 

Since my entire AU is based upon the fact that Regulus DIDN'T die, I had to read this story and see what you did with my boy here. It's hard, coming to terms with the truths you haven't wanted to see. When you think you're right, it's a matter of pride to keep fighting so that everyone knows you were right and everything you said was correct and that you know better because you were right and even when you're wrong, you're right. Regulus is one of my heros, to be very truthful. He didn't get a chance to tell his story, to be seen as brave and heroic and even his own brother never really knew how he died, why he died, that he died trying to make things right. Regulus never asked to be known anyway. He just did it because he grew a conscience and he knew. He figured it out for himself.

 

I feel like you did an excellent job with this little unseen scene- how he was feeling, what he was going through. This was the real turning point for him- the last straw. A little too late, but still at just the right time to help out later. The note at the end, dropped and lost, forgotten to time and never to be found. That really tugs at the heart strings. This was the best. I'm glad I grabbed this story.

 

-Liz



Butterfly of Doom by abhorsen

Rated: Teen Audiences • 3 Reviews starstarstarstar
Summary:

banner by paper.fox @TDA



You could always tell good people by their glossy hair and good posture.


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Butterfly of Doom

Omg, Bran, I'm ROLLING. I had to leave the room like six times to relay quotes to my fellow Potterhead playing videos games in the living room. Has this been added to the crack!fic recs yet? Because if not, I'm putting it there! I very much enjoyed the bit about Gryffindors were well liked and destined to die. It's terrifically terrible how true (and truly hilarious -in a morbid way-) that is!

 

I've never read an intentional Mary Sue character that I sort of liked, but Willow is amusing in her perfectness and good on her for recognizing that Peter is a shifty fellow. I'll bet she picked up on more than a few secret about him from the gossiping hat! (I can totally believe the hat just spills out the castle's secrets on a whim, too- a hotbed of criminal activity indeed!) And Ravenclaw as the second best house! (WE know it's really the BEST, but I appreciate the pretense for the sake of stereotypes, lmao.)

 

I especially liked the bit at the end where the canon is getting more and more off track. XD But I could read a whole story about Willow. Perhaps she can take Voldemort down!

 

I can't stop giggling. XD

 

-Liz



Carefully Edited Truth by TreacleTart

Rated: Teen Audiences • 1 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary:

James & Sirius

 

Lovely Banner by Katharos @ TDA! 

2nd Place in Slytherin Eagle's Marauder + Quote Challenge

Once out of earshot, Sirius turned to James with a look of admiration and confusion. "Oi Prongs. Did you just lie to Evans? I think that's a first."    


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

CTF!

 

This was adorable! I love Marauder era and I love Lily and James banter! And of course they tampered with the potion. You know, I really don't understand why they disliked Snape so much. Was it because he existed? Because he was friends with Lily? Because he was so much better in class than they were? Because he was a Slytherin? You really don't want to think of Harry's dad as a bully, but that's what he was, in essence. I know Sirius said he grew out of it, but it's just... I dunno, it's hard to swallow.

 

I do enjoy the quote at the top and the quotes you have in many of your fics. It's very true and I find your story represents it well. Only James could come up with a way to lie without actually lying. It absolutely astounds me that someone as arrogant and ridiculous as James could actually eventually win over someone as anti-rule-breaking and angry as Lily. It's always been my headcanon that she loved Severus, though. Not to say that she didn't love James when she was with him, but still. If the 'Mudblood' thing had never happened, I feel like she and Severus may have given it a go.

 

I did find a couple of technicals. The most glaring was the 12 hour and 9 year jump to noon of 1987. I actually got a bit excited when I saw it- thought I was in for some time travel, hahaha!

 

The other was... 'James stomach growled...'

Needs an apostrophe to make it James'.

 

That's all!

 

-Liz



Watching by TreacleTart

Rated: Mature Audiences • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Cho Chang

Haunting banner by Katharos @ TDA! 

WINNER of ShadowKat's Unusual Pairing Challenge

It took all of his restraint to remain hidden in the shadows, watching.    


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chills

CTF!

 

Kaitlin... I just... Need a minute.

 

I LOVE a good, gripping, chilling story, but this is probably one of the most mature fics I've read on either site. I'm not used to it. Like, I'm used to it from a normal perspective, like in real life books and other sites with lesser restrictions, but I guess I've never read many stories that push at the TOS boundaries. Is this even pushing them? I don't know. All I know is that I am extremely and officially creeped out. In a good yet horrifying way.

 

The way your wrote it was simply... Inspired. Even from his perspective, my skin was crawling as if I were the one he were watching. A lot of people don't understand the mind of a psychopath, but between this and Tyranny, I think you've got a talent for it! You should try for a Tom Riddle (if you haven't already) because I think it'd be brilliant. And creepy af. And I would read it all the time.

 

It was the attack that really got me. The entire time, my eyes kept getting wider and wider and I think I actually flinched a couple of times. I hope he gets expelled.

 

There was one little technical:

His breathe

breath not breathe.

 

And that's it! Looking forward to the next emotional twist!

 

-Liz



Tyranny by TreacleTart

Rated: Mature Audiences • 3 Reviews
Summary:

bellatrix lestrange

Haunting banner by angelica. @ TDA!

Written for Dirigible_Plums' AU Challenge

The Dark Lord is dead. So is Harry Potter. Bellatrix Lestrange has taken over in terrifying fashion Dumbledore's Army has been decimated. A rag tag group of insurgents remain. Can anything be done to stop the rise of the Death Eaters?    


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: A New Dark Lord

CTF!

 

Well, sheesh! What a way to kick off a story! And a wise way, too, for Bella. Always double tap. *nod nod* It's the same in the wizarding world as with zombies.

 

Anyway, I have to jump right to the end here to say that the last quote to Narcissa was absolutely chilling. It's the perfect example of a true Death Eater, one who would threaten and kill their own family to hold onto power. It's honestly quite terrifying, that sort of single-minded power mongering. But if anyone is going to do it, it would be Bella. And I can totally see her being more sentimental over Voldemort's death than even caring about her sister's family. It honestly quite shocked me that she threatened Draco's life but then I thought... Nope, sounds like Bella!

 

And the brutality of killing Harry a second time! Holy crap! Into a freaking TREE. I was wondering, at first, what you were going to do there since he came back in canon and, well, got my answer, I suppose. I do wonder, though, how Voldemort died because didn't Harry not put up a fight? Did Voldemort, in essence, commit suicide by killing the horcrux he made inside Harry? That will keep my head spinning for a while.

 

But fear not, lil' Bella! There's still Nagini!!!

 

Anyway, I hope you update on time because I want more of this!

 

-Liz



Garrick's Gift by Veritaserum27

Rated: All Audiences • 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Ollivander makes a new wand.


 


Part of the Recovery series.


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Garrick's Gift

This is one of the sweetest stories I've ever read and I think you're entirely right about Luna and Garrick. I can see it quite plainly in my head. I love how you went through the motions of explaining how he made the wand and how it had to be just right for her and his recollections of her "silly stories" and how they helped it- I just- *squee*

 

So, I actually went tiptoeing through to find a good fluff story for SOTM fluff noms and you just churn them out like BUTTER! And now I have to think of which one I liked more. Can't I just nom them all??? T_T

 

-Liz



In Which Harry and Ron Discuss Everything BUT Quidditch by Veritaserum27

Rated: All Audiences • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Ron decides to have a chat with Harry.


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Chat

I'm positively bursting with laughter! Ridiculously, whenever we have kids, I can see my husband having similar conversations with boyfriends of daughters, only it would have more to do with Dragon Ball Z than quidditch- Harry Potter is my area of expertise, hahaha.

 

I LOVE the silent conversation bit- absolutely perfect and Ron was just... Ron's my favorite. Always has been. I love him here. If I had to critique anything, it would be the use of the word 'ya' as opposed to 'you.' I understand what you were doing with it and it's more of a personal preference than critique- it's just bugged me after a little while.

 

I must say, I don't know what I was expecting when I read the title, but that wasn't it, hahaha! So delightfully good!

 

-Liz



House Elf Cup Event #1: Curling Rock Cakes by Veritaserum27

Rated: All Audiences • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Winky gets herself out of a sicky situation.

 

Part of the House Elf Cup series.


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Curling Rock Cakes

This was so adorable, I just can't even right now! It's sort of my head canon that Winky and Dobby became an item and I want to write a depressing one shot about her after he dies, but I just can't think about that right now because this is too stinking cute!

 

Poor Winky with her honey covered hands! But I find it ridiculously funny that they are using stolen cookies from Hagrid's as rocks to play their games with. And I don't like Skippy! He's not a very nice elf! XD

 

-Liz



Your Warmth by StarFeather

Rated: Teen Audiences • 1 Reviews starstarstar
Summary:

stunning banner by oleander @sp

 

This story was written for WindingArrow's Amnesia Experiment story challenge.

 

 


Reviewer: WindingArrow Signed starstarstar
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kenny! I'm so glad you could get in your entry and I am very excited to see that it will be longer than a one-shot!

 

You've got a lovely set up here. I've never actually been a fan of the Harry/Hermione ship and JKR's comments on the matter actually really break my heart. It's not that I couldn't see it happening, it's just that I've shipped Romione and Hinny since book 1. However, I am not closed minded on the matter and am very interested to see what you do with this.

 

I like the animagus angle- not many people use that much less apply it to main canon characters. I wonder if that will come up in any way now that Harry has lost his memories? Oh, and I can only imagine the drama that will unfold once Ginny comes back! With her temper and Hermione's snark and Harry's inability to remember anything, it's sure to get messy.

 

I can't wait to see what you do with this! Thank you for entering!

 

-Liz



Author's Response:

Hi, Liz. Thank you for giving me a chance to explore Harry/Hermione ship, which I've tried to find a chance for so long. Not a few authors tried writing the ship, some of them are good, but mostly abadoned in the middle of the story, so I'd like to continue this story as possible as I can.  

You gave me homework. Yeah, right, it will be messy when Ginny comes back. I can turn in both ways, their happy ending or sad ending... hmm, I need to think wisely...