Transferred from hpff back to 20th March 2016:
Hi, Deeds. I determined to read the works written by active gryffies today. I thought that the main character was Harry at first, then I wondered who you were writing about. It's an unique style that you didn't make it clear who he was.
It's funny when you imagine he was torturing the delicious chicken and Dean Thomas saved it from Neville.
The mood of the story was changed drastically from comical one to solemn one in the latter half, Harry's speech. But you didn't forget adding cheerful expression, George's reaction.
The way how Neville noticed Hannah's charm was too rapid turn but it is very Neville-like. I enjoyed the first half humorous description and his funny response to Hannah's confession.