until they both worked up the guts to bring up the change in the status quo, he’d refer to Millie White as his Valentine
I needed a change of pace and to read something happier off of your page. I haven’t read your story but I’m glad this can be seen as a stand-alone piece. I know nothing about their relationship but I already like the characters. They seem relatable and funny. Granted I love Sirius so that might be why but Millie seems like a neat character too. She sounds a little sassy but isn’t over the top and in your face.
As usual, he ignored Millie’s suggestion and continued to stroke his imaginary beard in thought.
I don’t know why but that came off super raunchy to me. Ha-ha.
“All warm and modest.”
I know. I know. I’m a child but…
Wow! I’ve never read a Batman fic before. This was super cool! At first I wasn’t sure where you were going with this only because it’s never been added to a fic before. I was pleasantly surprised! I think this was entertaining from beginning to end. You were able to wrap up the entire theme and leave me wanting a little bit more. I would love to read more about Sirius and Millie. It seems like they would be a good couple. Also, oh, before I forget, I liked that you kept up with the ‘Valentine’ thing until the end. It made me chuckle and Sirius can commit (in my mind) so I like that he committed to referring to her as his Valentine (in his head anyway).