Hi, Deeds, this was also so funny. I recognized you were a comedy queen after reading this story. :D
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Hi, Deeds! I came here for Kaitlin's Review-a Thon!
I read this story in the train on my way back home, and couldn't stop laughing! I chuckled imagining Harry's jet black hair dipped in the cheese and later Ron thought the strings of his messy hair were spiders.
The phrase," everyone had a nice bum in general" is very funny. I felt all Harry's dialogues were so comical. It's fun to read the four Gryffindors were in the state to be dead drunk.
I'm itching to know how excactly Ron wrote in the owl letter. I also lol at Dean's remark, "it's a new kind (of noodles)" to make Ron thin. There are more funny spots. I really enjoyed your comedy. Reading this chapter, I remembered your another comical story, Ron's driving lesson. I saw your tweet about Ron's story on the forums. Are you planning to write about him again? Please do ASAP. I can't wait. I continued laughing after I came home to leave review here. Anon and Sneville. How could the weird owl letter make Hannah think of Neville? I have a hunch that Ron must have done very funny things.
Hey, just transferring reviews from CTF!
"Hey there, here for CTF!
Sorry if this seems a bit random, I just haven’t read the other two chapters!
Poor Neville, he seems to be getting into a lot of trouble for getting drunk and having a hangover. I’d have thought he deserved it after the whole killing Nagini and saving the wizarding world but hey, maybe not. I suppose his gran has always been rather scary, and now that the wars ver she probably does want grandchildren and to see Nivelle with a nice future like a family and a good job since that's the world he created.
Aha, yeah, I’d definitely tease Neville too, but I can’t believe he did that! Kissed her and said he liked her I love it! I want to read more about drunk Neville. Oh wow, a ho. Poor Hannah lol.
This is such an interesting dynamic you have between Ron, Harry and Neville. You always read stories about Ron, Harry, Hermione and Ginny but thrown Neville into the mix and it changes things up a lot. I like it though, makes it interesting.
Aww, no poor Neville. He just can’t seem to get it right between girls. I feel like he needs to sober up and talk to her, not listen to Harry or Ron, and definitely stop kissing her.
This was such a funny chapter and I really will come back and review the other 2, and read them as I feel like I’ve missed out on some great writing!
- Shaza :)"
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I’m a big fan of Hannah, so I’m excited to see what you’ll do with her here!
Haha, i love your sense of humor in the paragraph talking about the manliness of the men. At first I thought it seemed silly that Ron would still have his mother give him warm milk, but nope, I can see hi m never stopping taking advantage of (in an affectionate way) her motherly hospitality.
HAHA and Man’s night is playing Gold fish!! Everything about it is perfect. Their rapport is on point and everything feels simultaneously in character and super fun to read.
In “but Weasley’s couldn’t exactly” Weasley’s should be Weasleys
Aww, Neville already has a super intense crush on Hannah! Tat’s too ad in a way because I like seeing these things develop, but it’s cool like we get to dive right in on the action
These. Boys. Are. Hilarious.
I want to be invited to man’s night just to watch their ridiculous antics. Can we have a story that’s just them messing around? Like, a novel length with installments for different nights? It’s all I need.
I am actually kind of surprised by how long you drag out man’s night, which is not remotely a complaint. I expected to get to the direct romance of Neville and Hannah, but I was so enjoying this diversion that I have no complaints.
Did I think I was reading a romance and I stumbled into a crack fic by mistake? I’m startion to not be so certain…
These gus had such heavy serious childhoods with the fight against evil and all, it’s kinda nice that they get to be children now that they’re supposed to e grow up. Being an adult is overrated anyway!
Woah, plot twist - it is a romance after all! Or at least hilarious drunken silly antics will lead to romance ;)
Haha, I don’t imagine Hannah had any idea this was how their relationship began XD
This story is such a blast + Hannah abbott, so I hope to be back for more once the craziness of CtF is over
Hey! Glad so much you enjoyed the chapter. This story is just fun. I had way too much fun writing it. I sat here typing away and laughing by myself in my room. Is it a bit much? Uh yeah. But I think that's why it works because they had such hard lives you kind of want to believe they had some fun after everything. I think they deserve it! So welcome the drunken antics and the guy talk and all around silliness.
I didn't even know what a crack fic was at the time I wrote this. I just wanted to write something where Neville was fun and the center of attention because he never used to get any love! This story is a romance, it's a bromance, it's everything you can think of and more. Okay, well, maybe not because the chapters continue in this way but I'm quite proud of it!
Thanks for mentioning the typo! I'll have to take care of it. I have poor eye site so commas and apostrophes are constantly out of place in my stories. It's just super hard to edit! I can't see!
Thanks for the lovely review. Hope to see you again soon!