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Name: Stella Blue (Signed) · Date: 09 Jun 2017 12:25 AM · Chapter: Problems

*Transferred from a really long time ago on HPFF*

 

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This was so cute! I really liked the goofy imagery ("chimpanzee smile" - haha) I love Teddy and Victoire, and I think you perfectly capture the awkwardness of the "uh-oh" moment of people realising they might not be just friends anymore. And I thought the way you began and ended the story was really good, with the list of problems.

I'd also like to add that you should write a story about how Teddy's grandmother might be a dragon. That was the most random detail but I found it so funny!

Great job on this, I loved it! :)



Author's Response:

*Transferred from HPFF*

 

Hello, there!

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it. The chimpanzee line was one of my favourites to write. And thank you for liking the problems list. It took me a very long time to get it to sound right.

 

I really shouldd write a story about that - I think it would be an interesting one!

 

Thanks for the wonderful review!



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