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Name: newsbypostcard (Signed) · Date: 29 Sep 2019 05:29 AM · For: and we will stumble through heaven

Gosh—I loved this one, these snippets, the way you've organized it, the way it feels fleeting and forever. This feeling of eternity, that nothing can get in their way and of course it does, time wears at them and war destroys them—I feel it with this pairing so much, and you've rendered it so well here. This last concluding section, the contrast between it and the one before it—what an impact. Wow. Thank you for writing this.



Name: MadiMalfoy (Signed) · Date: 31 Aug 2019 05:09 AM · For: and we will stumble through heaven

Hi Kayla! :) 

 

A classic angsty Wolfstar from you, how could I resist? :P I like how this is a progression of their years at Hogwarts with some later times during the First Wizarding War thrown in there for good measure. It gives a sense of the passage of time and allows for a strong development of their relationship to happen. You show the good, the bad, and the downright dark aspects of the Marauders in this and also their timelines from school to James and Lily’s death and Sirius’s “assassination” of Peter. Splicing them together out of order pushes that envelope of emotions we feel about Remus and Sirius, and I for one love it! Angst, angst, angst! Your description of settings, physical movements, and emotions from third person are extremely well done, and the sharpness that they tend to take on during the darker moments serves to heighten that tone. Halsey’s “Young God” is a great song and I can see why you chose it as inspiration for this fic! Great job with this, Kayla! :) 

 

~MadiMalfoy 



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