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I don't usually read George-mourns-over-Fred's-death stories, but I had a promise to keep, so here I am.
Tears, more tears, and even more tears...
This was so beautiful. In such a short space you managed to put so many emotions...
You have a way to describe the sea that is just perfect!
And all the childhood memories you put in here... It was all so sad and so sweet...
Another lovely piece of art, Kristin. You are such a wonderful writer.
All my love, as always.
I still can't believe you're reading EVERYTHING on my page. Like... I want to give you an award or something, it really means so much to me that you like my writing that much. Gahh, you are just wonderful ♥ *hugs*
Thank you so much! I'm glad you were able to feel all the emotion in this piece despite it being so short, and that you liked the descriptions of the sea. Glad you liked the memories as well. I felt that happy, humourous memories were necessary in a story where George couldn't be making jokes in the present. Someday there will be more happy memories for him :)
I appreciate your reviews so much! Thank you for your kind words! ♥