Name: dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap (Signed) · Date: 20 Feb 2017 01:27 AM · Chapter: Better Now Than Later

Interesting, very interesting. These are honestly characters I never read about so I was intrigued when I clicked on the story. I would have liked a little bit more input into their relationship. I understand the point of the story was to really focus on telling the parents though. I liked Roger! He seemed to have a good head on his shoulders. Didn't love her parents but I think that's a good thing. Their reaction was believable because who wants their teenage daughter to get married so young when she doesn't need to? Right? God, I'm older than her and I think my mother would actually react the same way. 

Author's Response:

Marietta was the prompt from the challenge this story was written for, and I really liked the idea of her marrying someone who she was at Hogwarts with...so hence the pairing. I think I also could have depicted a bit more of their relationship, but I also wanted give the impression that Roger was the more sensible one. I've never been good at cramming lots of stuff into a short one-shot :P


But I'm glad the reaction was believable, because that was one of the things about this story I was worried about. Thanks for reading :)

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