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Name: ImaRavenclaw (Signed) · Date: 01 Jan 2017 08:18 PM · Chapter: Best Christmas Ever

Awwww this was so cute. I actually think that this is the first Lily/Female OC I’ve ever read. It’s so great, I absolutely loved it! Lily and Elia make such a wonderful couple, and even though I haven’t read ‘Forest’ this makes me really want to. You write them so well! 

I loved how Elia and Lily find this way to balance out their old Christmas traditions with new ones they’ve made. I can see Lily getting a bit annoyed with her loud and big family and seeking comfort in Elia’s reserved and quiet one, and Elia wanting more excitement and finding it in Lily’s boisterous family. I also loved how they have their own traditions, that they’ve made together in their new home. 

And that proposal? Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Squees for life. That was just so cute, how they didn’t know that the other was going to propose but they both ended up proposing. It seemed slightly cliché, but it was still fantastic.

All in all this was such a cute fic! I wish you luck with my challenge, and hope to read more of your works.

Yours sincerely,

ImaRavenclaw

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Author's Response:

I'm glad to introduce you to a Lily/Female OC ship. =) I'm glad you liked it and appreciated the extreme fluff. Sometimes, it is hard to resist some of the romantic cliches but they seemed to fit here.

Thank you for the very sweet review. =)

- R



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