Transferred from HPFF
Wow, Amy. I didn't know you wrote this. Snape for chapter 1, Lily for chapter 2 and James next?
Each chapter is poetic, though all words are written from the first person's POV. I've never encountered this kind of style. It's new to me. Each chapter consists of simple expressions, but whole chapter is appealing so strongly. I can hear the voice of Snape. I can imagine how Lily felt with joy and fear. I could visualize how Lily played with her sister and how Snape observed Evans sisters. I feel like reading your story aloud. I think these senteces are musical.
Please continue writing and update this story. I'll be back again.