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Name: forever_dreaming (Signed) · Date: 13 Aug 2018 09:37 AM · [Report This]
Story:Sweet Goodnight Chapter: Sweet Goodnight

Hi there! I’m leaving a review for Quadpot (Match 3) and BvB!

 

I love reading headcanons about Percy and Audrey meeting and your characterization of Percy is honestly adorable hehe. He’s certainly very diplomatic and rational and logical—“Thought it’d be best to get [the kiss] out of the way now” is all the evidence you need of that hahaha, that made me laugh so much!—and everything you’d expect from Percy. But I like that you infused his admittedly stuck-up personality with a bit of awkward charm too. I was surprised at first that he’d be so forward as to directly proposition Audrey (with such a direct and honestly a bit bossy note, but when I realized that it was basically his way of sending a “Do you like me? Check yes or no” note, it felt much more in character heh, and a lot more charming too. And I love that Audrey’s so sweet and innocent, so soft—perhaps someone who can soften Percy’s hardened soul. 

 

Last note: I really enjoyed the alphabetic progression. It gave the story a sense of direction, and I love the story starts with A for Audrey and Z for Zeller. There’s a really conclusive feel to it. 

 

This was a lovely read, thanks so much for sharing it! <3



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