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Name: StarFeather (Signed) · Date: 19 Apr 2018 11:28 AM · [Report This]
Story:Mask of Truth Chapter: II. victoria_anne's chapter

Hi, Bianca! Thank you for dropping reviews on our story!

When I read the summary of this story, I couldn't resist stopping by.

And I read through from Rumpel's chapter to yours. It's brilliant! You two did great! I was curious to know how you would develop the story after Andromeda witnessed the love affair between her fiance and the slender armed woman.

 

"Hoyt Carrow's masquerade" ! An excellent plot! I feel for her that her father enchanted  the invitation card to appear everywhere she turned. At the same time, it sounds very cool. Pureblood society must have held the kind of luxurious party at that time.

 

Ah, death happened midmost of the extravaganza! Accidental death though, it must have been horrible for Andromeda who eventually found the woman had been pregnant. Though I guess all blames should be put on her fiance, Reuben, I feel for him that he had to think about breaking up with the woman or giving up his first child (perhaps?) under a Pureblood arranged marriage rule.  

 

It's possible that she found Ted Tonks under the circumstances you two developed. I really enjoyed the gap between the dark setting and romance happening Tonks took a lead in.   

 

K

 

 



Name: StarFeather (Signed) · Date: 19 Apr 2018 10:57 AM · [Report This]
Story:Mask of Truth Chapter: I. Rumpel's Chapter

Hi, Rumpel. I missed your world and came back. A summary of this story caught my eyes, so I stopped by here before coming back to your Karkaroff's story.

It's fantastic that you used the sentence for Ted's dialogue.

Though I've read a few fics about Andromeda and Tonks before here and there, I could enjoy reading this from the different aspect. It's completely new. Especially, her mother. Wow, Druella Black spoke in the story! Terrific! I don't think so many authors tried writing her. You did great, Rumpel.

 I also enjoyed a few Pureblood family names popped up here and there. It's fun to imagine how real Pureblood people at that time thought and behaved. I was attracted to Andromeda's emotion and felt for her struggle to survive in incomprehensible Pureblood society.     

 

K



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