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Name: victoria_anne (Signed) · Date: 03 Apr 2018 01:32 AM · [Report This]
Story:First Kiss Chapter: First Kiss

- transferred from HPFF -

 

Ginaaa! ♥

(your author page so purdy)

Okay so I chose this story for a few reasons:
1. Tonks and Remus (squee!)
2. First kiss (double squee!)
3. Because it's for Chiara!

Oh God, your writing. I can't even. It is so beautiful. I wanted to sink into the screen and sob among the beautiful chosen words!

How am I meant to review when I have no words?! Er... (Gah look how inferior I am to the magnificence of this story!) Everything was just realistic. I love the little details you put in. The curse, Andromeda greeting Lupin, Sirius' death.

Also, I'm pulling this out: "She didn't want to dishonor the fallen, but teasing Sirius felt so natural" because... because... just because.

There is nothing I didn't like about this (except the length maybe, GIVE ME MOAR), just an amazing one shot written by an amazing person. 

P.S. Thank you for everything you've done in the past few days. We all love you so much.

♥ Bianca    



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to transfer this over. In re-reading this review, I’m reminded of how much I appreciate your words. You are so sweet! I had a lot of fun writing this story and I’m thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it. :)



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