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Name: Crimson Quill (Signed) · Date: 07 May 2018 09:50 AM · [Report This]
Story:Summerbee Chapter: Summerbee

 

Hey Gina,

 

Here for gryffie review tag! I thought this piece was interesting, we see a lot of people write about mental illness but really you did a twist on it, it really worked for me. I thought the first line was very gripping as it's such a powerful statement which in the second line you flip it on it's head.

 

I think Lucy's journey here is so important as something worth writing about. Summerbee is her extreme version of growing up and realising that things aren't as they seem. I love how we see Norah through Lucy's eyes, how someone that seems so 'normal' can be at Summerbee. I thought the connection that you captured between them was great, it both dramatic and natural. It was like this awakening. This one-shot as a questioning identity honestly works.

 

I like the little details about her family here, like Hugo saving up for the tickets to the World Cup. it's like nothing in her world is really what she thought it was. I thought the scene with Norah in her bed was really turning point for Lucy. It was powerful but understated, it makes me really want to know more about Norah and her story. I hope that she finds some peace. 

 

I also wanted to say well done for completing challenge with restrictions of the wording, I thought the piece flowed beautifully and smoothly done. I loved the detail about the title being inspired by creator of Cheering Charms too! you obviously put a lot of the thought into your writing.

 

- Abbi xo 

 

 



Name: victoria_anne (Signed) · Date: 03 Apr 2018 01:34 AM · [Report This]
Story:Summerbee Chapter: Summerbee

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- was anonymous under Chocolate Frog Card :P -

 

Greetings to you, lovely Gina, 

I have come here to read of Summerbee.

I trust you fared well in the challenge arena,

With this entry of the young Lucy.

I'll admit first I was sad,

To hear of Lucy Weasley's pain.

And then of course I was glad,

She found a friend in Norah Vane.

I thought you captured well,

Life in such a place.

On times like this have some had to dwell,

But I think you handled it with grace.

And of course your style is perfect,

As your writing always is.

It is why this story was my pick,

One of the best I've read, indeed ‘tis.

If someone asks for a story of A-Z,

I will tell them of this one right off the bat.

And of course they will believe me,

For I am the Sorting Hat.    



Name: magnifique (Signed) · Date: 02 Apr 2018 08:28 PM · starstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Summerbee Chapter: Summerbee

This was??? such a lovely story??? And you handled such sensitive materials so gracefully and delicately?? I really really enjoyed this and it made me feel very peaceful, (as someone with some Mental Health Stuff) that you didn't shy away from the topic, but also didn't over-describe or go into anything gratuitous. So! Thank you for writing this, it was a real pleasure to read and I'll have to check out anything else you've got up!



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