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Name: ShadowRose (Signed) · Date: 12 Apr 2018 01:32 AM · [Report This]
Story:Home Chapter: seven

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Oh I knew JJ had a thing for Carson! Bringing her a BEC last chapter was a dead giveaway, lol. Also awww look at James frowning and getting a lil jealous as a result! On a different note, I totally get where Carson's coming from in regards to not wanting sympathetic responses - I get super cringy and awkward with those too. Anyways, great chapter and I can't wait to continue following along with this story wherever you decide to post it!



Name: ShadowRose (Signed) · Date: 12 Apr 2018 01:32 AM · [Report This]
Story:Home Chapter: six

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Another truly delightful chapter! Honestly, the whole "let's be better" followed by "no one has been better" sounds exactly like how every bottomless brunch in my life has gone, so that was hilarious. I also love Fred getting mad at Carson because she pointed out his own feelings to him. And I'm pretty sure this is eventually a James/Carson thing because of the banner? I hope so, because I already love the little moments of chemistry that they've got going on! Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter :)



Name: ShadowRose (Signed) · Date: 12 Apr 2018 01:31 AM · [Report This]
Story:Home Chapter: five

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How did I just now discover that you've got not one, but two new chapters up since I read this story last?? Ahh, I'm slacking. Your whole cast of characters is constantly cracking me up and the entire thing with Al at the end was hilarious. And omg Freddy being completely unaware that he has a thing for Meg was a great addition. Oh and Drew!! Obviously we haven't seen much of him yet but I have a feeling he'll show up some in future chapters, so that'll be interesting. Anyways, another lovely chapter and I can't wait for the next one!!



Name: ShadowRose (Signed) · Date: 12 Apr 2018 01:31 AM · [Report This]
Story:Home Chapter: three

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This was another really lovely chapter! I love Carson's family so much - you've done a great job writing all of them, especially Oliver and Alicia. I also love her interactions with all the boys and her new friendships with Meg and Maeve - can't wait to see how all of those develop!!



Name: ShadowRose (Signed) · Date: 31 Mar 2018 03:13 PM · [Report This]
Story:Home Chapter: two

I'm going to transfer as many of my reviews as I can from the archives over to here, so here goes!

 

Hi!! Just wanted to pop into your reviews and tell you that I really like this story thus far. Carson's got a ton of personality and is so fun to read. I can't wait to get to know James and Fred a little better - which I'm assuming will happen in the next couple of chapters! Can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love that idea of transferring reviews over and will definitely do the same over the next few days. We've all worked so hard and I think it's important we keep up the enouragement and support and it's definitely nice to see the feedback! Thanks again for the review!



Name: daylight (Signed) · Date: 30 Mar 2018 06:15 PM · [Report This]
Story:Home Chapter: one

Hey! Glad to see your story on a new site, I'm just making the transition myself! This is such a fun cast of characters, can't wait to see where the story takes them!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Definitely getting used to things here but I'm excited people are moving over and happy to see you here Glad you like the characters, they're a fun goup to write so I'm happy it comes across just as enjoyable. Planning to have the next chapter up sometime this weekend or early next week. Thanks for the review and hope you continue to enjoy!



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