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Name: Felpata_Lupin (Signed) · Date: 14 Aug 2017 04:43 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:The Walk To Your Beloved Chapter: The Walk To Your Beloved

Hello!

So, I was looking for something sweet to read tonight and Sian sent me here.

And wow, this was so lovely! So sweet and adorable and heart-warming, I just adored it!

I might have teared up a bit when you mentioned her mother being gone (that's a bit of a touchy topic for me) but even that little point of bittersweetness was so fitting. And, Merlin, I loved how much love she has for James and how much adoration he has for her! I loved just about everything of this!

Also, can I just point out how clever you were with the A to Z thing? I don't know if I would have been able to... And I also think your use of second person was brilliant, and your descriptions were just lovely!

This is such a great piece and emotioned me so much! It made me cry and it made me smile and it's just so great!

Thank you for sharing this and so much love!

Chiara



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