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Name: Dojh167 (Signed) · Date: 22 Jun 2017 08:29 AM · Chapter: Into the Forest

Yay Parvati!


I have to admit, my first reaction was “But not Parvati/Lavender???” And while Femslash is always inherently superior to Not Femslash, that also made me realize that we never really get to see Parvati on her own, not attached to others. I’ve seen fics on Lavender without ships, but not Parvati. So I’ve come around to being glad that you wrote it this way.


This is highlighted well with the first line, because at that point the reader genuinely has no idea what her secrets may be, but we never knew her well enough to argue for or against that.


(okay, Good Lavender reference)


Awww, what a beautiful concept!


Hagrid is the best enabler. We never really know him to have close relationships with anyone but the trio, but I like to think there are others with whom he has a compassionate understanding. He would definitely sympathize with Parvati wanting to escape to be with the unicorns.


Hehe, I like that Parvati was surprised that Hagrid likes gentle creatures too.


I love the phrase “breathed peace into her.”


This was just so sweet and lovely all over! It was of course set in a dark context, but that was what made it so meaningful. I’m glad Parvati has something beautiful that’s all her own.


Well done!


Sam.



Name: AltraX (Signed) · Date: 20 Jun 2017 01:53 AM · Chapter: Into the Forest

Hiya!

 

I’m not quite sure how to start this review. Like, if I could use the smiley faces like on the forums, the one with heart for eyes would definitely be a good starting point. Because this entire piece was beautiful. Like, breathtakingly beautiful.

 

You have such a delicate tone, one that makes this story light, despite all the bad things happening in the castle at the current point in time. You bring readers into Pavarti’s world, into the peace that comes in the forest, into the peace that accompanies the Unicorns in their home, and it was just…it was soothing, to read Pavarti going into this place she loves, and that makes her whole again. That and your word choice and imagery and just…everything seemed so well thought out, so carefully placed. It really was lovely.

 

I really loved Pavarti’s character as well. How she’s so honest about things, how she knows herself well enough to take a moment to take care of herself, knows that someone will be able to explain her disappearance, to understand it. She was such a great choice of character, one I never have really thought twice about, and you gave her such depth and made her real.

 

Really, I can’t get over any part of this. It’s so beautifully written and I’m almost sad that there isn’t more to it…

 

So. Before I go, I’m going to share two of my favourite lines (although there are numerous others that I loved as well!)

 

“[S]he sought it out and knew that it would renew her, like a phoenix rising from the ashes.”

 

“(except for Flobberworms.  Parvati wasn't sure anyone - least of all Hagrid - had any idea what they did)”

 

Excellent job!

 

-Mikaela xx



Name: sunshinedaisieswindmills (Signed) · Date: 19 Jun 2017 10:15 PM · Chapter: Into the Forest

SIAN. WHAT ARE YOU DOING, MAKING ME CRY IN 1001 WORDS?? NOT. FAIR. 

This was, like everything you write, exceptionally beautiful. I wasn’t sure what to expect when I opened up the story, but I was so pleased with what I found. I don’t normally pay attention to Parvati as a character, but you’ve given her such depth here, it’s hard not to care. Just the brief mentions of her sister’s depression and her feelings for Lavender made her so human. That’s a pretty exceptional feat in a thousand and one words. I giggled a little at the mention of pixies pulling at her hair; I suppose that would be rather irritating, especially when you’re on the way to your safe place. This whole idea of Parvati wandering out into the woods to seek out the unicorns is so sweet, and again, just so human. Giving her this little tradition makes her so well rounded.

 

Your description was beautiful too! Not that I expected anything less. I love the way you wrote about the unicorns, I could definitely see them, in all their splendor, inside my head. I’m also impressed by your ability to make the reader empathize with Parvati, not only in her stress and angst, but in the peace she finds when visiting the unicorns. It gave me the same sort of feeling.  I think this story is especially appropriate right now, considering all the awfulness that has gone on around the world recently. I think everyone could use a visit with the unicorns. Unfortunately they don’t exist, so it’s very lucky there are fics like yours to do the job for them. <3

Cheers!

katie.



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