Reviews For Lest We Forget

Name: forever_dreaming (Signed) · Date: 11 Aug 2017 01:43 PM · starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Story:Lest We Forget Chapter: Lest We Forget

Ahh I need to get some tissues after this! This was a very sweet and tender fic that touched my heart. As a twin myself, I know that the worst thing that can happen to any twin is losing their twin; I think you've portrayed the residue feelings of that loss very well. It makes sense that the feelings of grief would return now for George. I loved that George retained his sense of humor and easy-going personality, but I loved more that it has so clearly been weathered a little by grief and loss and pain. 

my favorite part was when Molly asked George what she'd say to his dad if she died of laughter, and George replied so easily that he'd say that Fred made him do it--that was perfect, considering their earlier conversation. Loved it! 

Author's Response:

Thank you for this amazing review.  It was wonderful to get, and to know that I touched on such a hard subject with reality and tenderness.  I appreciate your feedback, especialy as a twin.

I tried very hard to make George still be George, because I refuse to write him as always broken, but I also wanted to show that he is certainly changed.  And also will never stop missing Fred.

Thanks again!

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