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Name: Stella Blue (Signed) · Date: 30 Aug 2017 07:46 PM · Chapter: Chapter 5

Aw. I love the little sentimentality we see here when Zoe gets Wash's Hawaiian shirt to bring back for him because it's his favorite, even though it's really not important to their mission there. That's really sweet. :)

 

And the progression of 'let's sneak in quiet-like' to 'let's just explode that gorram door' is so very Firefly. It's so easy to visualize. Perfect. XD

 

Also, I'm very convinced they're walking into a trap, or at least something that was intended to be found. Don't put Vera away for a second, Jayne! I'm reallly wondering where everyone is... *bites nails*

 

Great chapter, as always!



Name: Stella Blue (Signed) · Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:35 AM · Chapter: Chapter 4

I'M BACK I'M BACK! Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about this story. Just didn't have internet for a while - you know how it is.

 

(first things first: I think chapters 4 and 5 are the same chapter (3)? or maybe my internet connection is acting up. Anyway, I don't think that was intentional so just letting you know.)

 

But now onto the actual review! Once again, this is really great. You get into the minds of these characters so well - it's like I'm reading the screenplay for a lost episode. In particular, Mal - everything from the way he talks to the way he thinks about his crew, you've really gotten into his head and can write him so perfectly, even the really subtle nuances of things like how he asked Wash to tell him what happened and was friendly about it but it really wasn't a request. And how he knows and recognizes the abilities of each of his crew members and is very protective of them. AND, Wash trying to hide the fact that the person who hurt him did so to get to Mal because he knows how Mal will react. like, the interplay between the characters is just so well done. I know I gush about this on every review I leave for you, but that's just because it's so true.

 

And yet, they beat the tar outta ya -- Haha... I feel like he could have had better word choice. Tar? :P

 

Okay. I'm so ready for Zoe and Mal and Jayne to get their revenge. (well, for Jayne maybe it's not as much revenge as a chance to beat up a bad guy, but either way, the three of them have some hard work to do.) Also, I feel bad for Wash, who just after he's finished getting beat up and tar and feathered and then had to sit through having it all peeled off, now he has to sit and worry that something similarly awful is going to happen to his wife. Poor guy. :-/ He deserves a vacation after all this.

 

Great chapter!



Name: Stella Blue (Signed) · Date: 11 Jul 2017 07:10 PM · Chapter: Chapter 3

Poor Wash. What happened to him is just awful and it's so sad to see him suffering like that, because Kaylee's right - he's literally the most easygoing person on the crew and it's hard to imagine him getting on anyone's bad side. But of course, it's not him that they're after... and that makes me worry if anyone else is going to get hurt because clearly the attackers don't care who they hurt on their way to Mal.

 

Your character portrayals are stellar throughout. I really love the depth you pointed out to the friendship between Kaylee and Wash, which I don't remember being mentioned significantly in the show, but your spin on it makes a lot of sense.

 

Btw, I hope you've got more of this story up your sleeve - I really want to know what happens and this is such a great start! So glad I found this. :)



Author's Response:

I am rather mean to him here, aren't I.  He is too nice to be suffering.  

 

Yep.  They are after Mal.  And I used to know why.  I still kinda do, but I didn't take very good notes.  Gonna need to untangle this fic a bit to get it going again.  As for if others will get hurt....*evil grin*  I DO remember that part.

 

Again with the blushing!  Seriously, you are gonna give me a big head!  

 

I'm not sure the friendship between Wash and Kaylee is exactly canon, but I like to think it is.  They are both pashionate about the same thing.

 

I DO have some more of this.  I got up to 11 chapters before I got stopped.  I didn't finish putting them up here because no one was reading it and I figured it could wait until some other stuff went up.  BUT, if you're gonna read, I'd be happy to add them.

 

Thanks again!  You made my whole day!



Name: Stella Blue (Signed) · Date: 11 Jul 2017 06:24 PM · Chapter: Prologue

FIREFLY FIC??? I AM HERE

 

Oh no! Wash! Why is someone punching him? Stop! :(

 

She looked like an angel, if angels wore revolvers strapped to their thighs and terror-inducing scowls on their faces. -- this is perfection

 

This is a great prologue. I don't think it's weird that you made up your own planet -there's so many planets it makes perfect sense that the show didn't cover all of them. Also, you've got the dialogue and mannerisms of the characters down so perfectly - not that this is surprising, because I've learned by now that you're very talented at writing characters to a T - and so far this does feel like it could be a lost episode of the show. I can't wait to read on.



Author's Response:

Oh wow!  What an amazing surprise to get today!  I hope you know these totally made my day!

 

:D  You liked that description of Zoe?  Thanks!

 

And such compliments.  I'm blushing to my roots.  You are way too kind to me.  Thank you so much for reading!  I'm extactic to have someone onboard for this!  Maybe it will make me finish it!



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