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Name: M C Crocker (Signed) · Date: 24 Sep 2017 03:45 PM · Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey Rose,

 

I feel like I have read and reviewed this before, but there is nothing here.  Maybe on another site?  My brain is fuzzy at this point.  Still, this was a good story.  I know this fits into your larger universe and into stories I have not yet read but I did really enjoy this. I love the unique perspective you took in telling the story and the nurse you use has a very unique and realistic voice.  It makes me think of my best friend who used to be a nurse.  

 

I felt like the hospital descriptions were dead accurate.  I also love the little light notes of Iris' life mixed in such as Dr. Ali and how he goes through nurses and only lets those he wants to make a move on calling him Raj.  It mad the story very much fall on Iris rather than the HP characters which in some way it was also about them.  It leaves a lot to be wanted in the sense of knowing Brandon and Albus' story but at the same time, their tale is another one that isn't told here.  It just so happened that the two intersected into Iris' life.

 

Overall a fabulous job and maybe one of these days I will indeed read your Next Gen stuff. (I'm just painfully slow about reading fanfic it is my shame).



Name: MegGonagall (Signed) · Date: 06 Sep 2017 03:26 AM · Chapter: Chapter 1

*Transferred from AO3*

Rose! Omg I thought I reviewed this!

First, thank you so much for letting me beta and help with the title. I was more than happy to, and hope I was at least some help lol. Ok story.

I think you really got the feel of healthcare down. Either it's totally dead, and you're bored out of your mind, of everything seems to happen at once and you're so, so busy. Especially on over night shifts. Either you're struggling to stay awake, or you wish you were off that night.

But then Al comes in and my blood drained. What happened to him?! I was so worried about Al and thought he might not make it for it minute. Which, when it comes to your writing, that's not totally out of the realm of possibilities. And I can only imagine how strange it would be for a Muggle to find a wand and Wizarding money. Like, wtf is this?

Aaaaand then we find out that BRANDON DID THIS?!? Do you hear that? It's the sound of hearts shattering all around the world. They're such a great couple, and things finally ended well for them, and then YOU DID THIS! *kicks and throws tantrum like a toddler* Al was so frightened of the thought of him coming there and just... ugh!

Iris was a good nurse. I like how she kind of stayed with him, and then how protective she was when Brandon came to get him. Because Brandon definitely came off as scary and intimidating, and it said a lot about her character and how much she cares for her patients.

Can we talk about how creepy Brandon was? What in the world are you doing to all of us, Rose?! And this isn't going to be resolved for a long time, and people need answers, and you're so evil (in the best way possible), but I love every second of everything you write in this universe, and I want to hug you but shout at you at the same time! *calms down*

I can't wait to read the eventual conclusion of all of this, and see how this all gets resolved. Amazing writing, as always. And thank you again for letting me beta and the inside info! ;)

<33

Tons of love, 
Meg



Name: Vilja (Signed) · Date: 09 Jun 2017 01:08 PM · Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi :) I came here from the Staff Appreciation Event

This is the first story I've read from you, and I really liked it - I realized at the end that it is part of a bigger series, but it felt like there is some added mystery because of the things I don't know.

First I thought that I did not like that the summary had already said that this would be about a wizard patient at a Muggle hospital. I would have wanted to figure that out by myself (from hints like the stick and the galleons). This way the beginning was quite slow, as I already knew from the summary what would happen.

But things speeded up by the end. When I found out that the patient was Albus Potter, that definitely caught my interest!

And I thought it was very clever that they brought him in from near Charring Cross Road, one of the few Muggle roads mentioned in the HP series (and known to be close to the Leaky Cauldron.

OK, so he has a daughter, that was new to me. And he has a husband, also new. I liked these short pieces of information, it didn't feel like I needed more backstory to understand this.

One thing I would be really interested in is how blood transfusion from a Muggle would effect a wizard - I mean they keep talking about pure blood / mudblood, I wonder if blood really has to do with magic, or if that is just an old superstition. I expected Albus to be worried to lose his magical abilities or something like that. Even if magic is most probably inherited, so in the genes, but I can imagine that blood transfusion would at least temporarily temper with magical abilities, until new blood is produced by the body.

Overall, as I said, I liked this story very much, I think it is a clever concept to show a mixture of the Muggle and Wizarding world.

Happy Staff Appreciation Week, and Thank You for all your efforts at HPT!



Name: AbraxanUnicorn (Signed) · Date: 16 May 2017 01:52 PM · Chapter: Chapter 1

Hello again! Here for another CTF thankyou review, for all your hard work over the last month. And also because I CANNOT resist getting a bit more of Al-Bran action :)

OMG - this is brilliant, butbutbut you cannot leave this story just hanging HERE??!

I LOVE wizarding stories set in the muggle world! The combination gives scope for an infinite number of interesting possibilities to arise. And I love medical drama too. The fact that these two things have appeared in one story might just have made my day!

The hospital aspect of this is so true. One minute it's dead and staff are playing games on their iPhones; the next minute, there are emergencies practically littering the corridor and everyone is flying round like blue-bottomed flies. I love the idea that a wizard is brought into A&E, but OMG did it have to be Albus, who seems quite agitated, and I don't think it's just the effects of whatever altercation he had been in prior to his admission? How can you do this to Al??

I loved the details regarding Al's wand and his wizarding money!

Yikes!! Does Brandon appear at the end, or is it an imposter posing as Albus's partner? If it's really Brandon, there's a big chunk of something I clearly need to read which explains what on earth happened to Al's lovely husband?? I hope Cora isn't in danger :/ And I really, really hope you will be back very soon to explain some of the cliffhangers you've left us with in this story.

OMG, I NEED to know what happens next!!

Brax X



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